Thursday, April 15, 2010

A night to remember

Apprehensive, she bit into her nails. It was almost time for him to come home. And as hours turned into minutes, her feet were getting colder by the faint ticking of the clock. This was the day she had been waiting for. There was a complete movie going on in her mind, only there had been innumerable re-runs whenever she caught something off the mark. There was no room for any miscalculation. It had to be perfect. Paradisiacal.

Still jittery, she turned toward the room to have one last look. With her slim fingers clutching the handle of the door, she pushed herself into darkness. The room smelled wonderful. It had to do because she had taken extreme care in choosing the best candles. The sweet scent of lavender filled her nostrils. As the fragrance took the better of her, she was sure that the night which stood in front of her would be divine.

She checked the neatly made bed, the matching cushions, the drapes, the candles, the flowers and ocourse the carpet. Silently, she closed the door behind her. She was positive. No jittery feelings crossed her this time. There was just one thing missing. Just one. And it was him. She looked at the clock again. 7:35, it read. And then she heard the door bell ring.

She hurried towards the door.

Standing outside, it was him. His mouth opened wide when he saw her. She realised that she forgot to take one last look at herself in the mirror. But that's okay. His open mouth was evident of the fact that she looked stunning in red. The colour of passion, it certainly was. She gave him her best dimpled smile to add on to her beauty. "Hi honey", she said.

"Whooaa, you are looking hot tonight", he winked.

He bent down and gave her a peck on the lips.

Her candy flavoured lip gloss left the delicious taste on his lips. Wanting more, he licked them.

With an inch of separation, their eyes met.

She smiled. He smiled too.

Feelings of passion arose.

She grabbed his laptop bag from his hands and said, "You must be tired. Why don't I take you up and freshen you a bit". This time, she winked.

She took his hand in hers and took charge. She guided him to their bedroom. And then she stopped.

"You go in first", she said.

He opened the door and took a step inside.

The lavender fragrance tickled him in the nose. He knew that this sweet smell was definitely the beginning of something.

He caught her hand when she entered the room after him. He pulled her close. The only light in the room was a ray coming in from the corridor. And that light was enough for him to see the romance in her eyes.

He brought his lips close to hers. He slid his arms around her waist. She wrapped hers around his shoulders. And then their lips touched. He grabbed her upper lip. And they kissed.

Her hands reached out to unbutton his shirt. Starting from the top most button, taking one at a time, she slowly reached till the last one. He took her in his arms. She could hear his heart beating. How she longed to hear his heart say that he loved her. And resting her head on his chest, she suddenly felt secure.

"I'll quickly go take a shower", he said unwillingly. He wanted to stay but he didnt want his tiredness to spoil the night that lay in front of them.

She smiled in agreement for while he would be away, she would get the time to light the candles as well.

He headed towards the bathroom, took his clothes off and entered the shower. He looked forward to the night ahead. He loved her. He wanted this night to be the best. He wanted to take her along to the divine heights. Lost in his thoughts, he didn't notice the door open behind his back. She tip toed, entered the shower and hugged him from behind. Caught unaware, he barely managed to turn. Standing there was his sweetheart, the girl of his dreams whom he married a few months ago. He hugged her tight. He then took her face in his arms and brought his lips onto hers. The drops of water came rushing towards them interrupting their sensous kiss but that didn't seem to bother them.

The room, lightened by the beautiful purple candles, was waiting for its masters to return.

Meanwhile, she caught hold of the creamy lavender bath wash and poured some onto her palm. Very erotically, she moved her foam filled hands over his masculine chest. She took a deep breath and inhaled the lavender filled air. This too was chosen appropriately keeping in mind his likings.  She rubbed her hands over the back of his shoulders and raced her fingers along the spinal cord. She reached down and rubbed him. Slowly her hands moved towards the front. She rubbed him there. He moaned a bit. Bursting with pleasure, he took the bath wash and rubbed her. With great tenderness, he caressed her boobs till her nipples got hard. He moved down and circled her belly button with the tip of his finger. Sensitive to his touch, she pulled her tummy inside. That excited him. He continued moving his finger aimlessly thereby making her inquisitive about where he would touch her next. She loved surprises.. His fingers moved further down. He rubbed her between her legs. And this was the moment he had been waiting for. A bite on his shoulder showed how she excited she was. They washed away all the soap from each other. Unable to control, he picked her up and came out.

Surprised, to see the lighted candles, he made her lie down on the bed covered with red sheets with lovely satin trim. He jumped into the bed besides her. Cuddling and caressing her, he pushed himself inside her. She screamed. Not with pain but with joy. She could feel him inside. She could feel the warmth of his flesh. They became one. One body. One soul.

The whole night filled with passion still lay in front of them

Completely paradisiacal, as she had thought.

34 comments:

Mehak said...

oo, steamy stuff! well-written! :)

The Bald Guy said...

I love it, I love it, I love it!

Encore!

Phoenixritu said...

Whoa! That is some description!!!

@ease said...

ahaaan..!!
some one has described it so well. is it inspired from some Shobha Dey stuffs..??

Atul said...

...mills and boon mebbe? ;-)

chitz said...

too good chanz...luv it...:)

Sakshi said...

I am hot. WOW!!! Phew...

Rashmi said...

Ohhhhhhhhhhk! now, someone was accusing me of dreaming or hallucination whatever huh...
What is this then woman ;)
But man man WHAT IS THIS!
Awesome!
Phew :)

Nipun said...

Not for kids..:P
That was awesome chanz..
Another story from u....:)
Steamy hot and sensuous..
Just loved it.

Cheers

Nuts

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

wwwwoaah beautiful description boss....u r a sensual writer....bravo!!!

Garima said...

I am wondering what to write here...to keep up to the level of maturity you have portrayed in terms of writing.

Awesome gurl...I Loved Itt!!!

:)

@ease said...

@chanz: plz chek the last line

The whole night filled (iwth) with passion still lay in front of them.

Dont you think, you should rate this blog as "A" and put a Statuary Warning too in the begining..??

:P

Chanz said...

@ Mehak : Lol... yeah... it is steamy... :)

Chanz said...

@ TBG : :)

Chanz said...

@ Phoenixritu : thanks... welcome to my blog... :)

Chanz said...

@ @ease : naaaaaa... Shobha De writes different things.. Not this atleast..

Chanz said...

@ Atul : M&Bs are for kids.. :D

Chanz said...

@ Chitz : Thanks sweety.. :)

Chanz said...

@ Sakshi : I wish a lot of people would write that..

Chanz said...

@ Rashmi : hehehe...yeah... I got the inspiration from you.. :D

well, yeah... its good to make you feel umm.. something something.. :d

Chanz said...

@ Nipun : hehe.. definitely not for kids... Thanks.. :)

Chanz said...

@ Sid : wow... i liked it.. sensual writer.. :D

Chanz said...

@ Garima : Well, yaa... it is definitely mature.. a better word would be ADULT..

Chanz said...

@ @ease : Corrected.. Thanks.. I like your suggestion... Perhaps, I'll put an A sign in the beginning.. OR maybe write a disclaimer... :D

Surreal said...

Whooaaa! Erotica!Beautifully written.

Chanz said...

@ Surreal : thanks girl.. :)

Kedar said...

too good chanz... too good...

buckingfastard said...

1> with the repeated mention of lavender...i suppose lavender is ur turn on!!!??

2>damn u!!! put some "eroticism ahead" symbol in beginning...after reading half of it...i had to go and close the door..coz due to ur awesome writing...my thing started to confuse between fiction and reality and got all awake!! :P

Sorcerer said...

para..pa..pa..pa..ra...ra..
Im loving it

Chanz said...

@ Kedar : Thanks.. :)

Chanz said...

@ BF : Lol @ you comment.. Seriously..?? Is it that erotic..?? :D

naaa... lavender is considered auspicious according to vaastu/feng shui or reiki.. I m forgetting which one is it pout of these.. Thats the reason why i mentioned it..

Chanz said...

@ Sorcy : :)

subu.ps said...

hey chanz. u described the mood pretty well.

Saurabh Panshikar said...

ooooh that was sensual...
I was looking for a twist at the end which never came... And that was the best thing about it!

gr8 writing...