Wednesday, October 28, 2009

I saw you today




I saw you today
Standing behind the counter at the cafe
That square face
Those drunken eyes
That neat hairstyle
Those wide lips
I saw you today
You turned
And smiled at me
"What can I get you ma'am?", you asked.
I could say nothing
'Coz I saw that same square face
that same neat hairstyle
those same drunken eyes 
those same wide lips
Only it wasn't you.

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8 comments:

@ease said...

ahaa..!!
chakkar kya hai boss..??

unknowneccentric said...

Simple n subtle yet very intense...liked it a lot :)
Cheers girl!

Chandni.. said...

@ @ease: dont u worry... i aint going after any guy... :P


@ rashmi: thanks sweety... :)

chitz said...

short,crisp and good..

buckingfastard said...

nicee...was kind of poetic 55 fiction!!

well xpressed!! :)

Dankest Cartoon said...

well...said!!
:)

Chandni.. said...

thanks guys... I wasnt sure of this wud come out good. havent written anything so short.. But now I have regained my confidence.. thanks for reading ma blog...

Punia said...

Mankhiyaa flyin over d gutter......
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